Monday, December 10, 2007

Piecing Together Comments

Rating: 3.9

You can’t see the wood
for the trees?
Or maybe there are
too many logs?
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Francesca Johnson
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Original Unknown Girl 06 February 2008

I love this poem Fran, it's very clever, much like you, agree with Allie, there is more to this than first meets the eye, it deserves another read. HG: -) xx

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Alison Cassidy 24 December 2007

I'm sure this one has some very pointed and personal overtones, but to me it is about beavers building a lodge. I guess it's because I have beavers on my brain - 15 of them to dress for the dance performance that should have been... Ah, but that's another story. Interesting piece, Francesca. Your psychologist's hat is showing. love, Allie xxxx

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