Pieces When She Falls Comments
Any port in a storm she said. I was the only thing to cling to in a sea of stormy sadness. In the tempest of her eyes I am as broken as her promise. Rent and splintered as the skies, she as cold as my caress
“Won’t you keep me warm? ” she said. I am convenient and just glad to be here
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Simply beautiful. I loved every part of this. Thank you so much for sharing. Please continue writing
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7/22/2025 1:05:56 PM # 1.0.0
I have a poem I will post later that expresses this same sentiment. I know it well. I love the structure used here. The repetition was excellant. It adds memory and actually substance to the poem. A nice read. Well done. GW62