Saturday, January 22, 2022

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Rating: 5.0

I've been running in this life.
Half a soul with consistent strife.
I've filled this void, with the same pain I feel inside.
Voids I fill with merry drinks, jokes, and all while smiling.
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Michael Dikeman
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David Wood 22 January 2022

Sounds like it's time to review your life. It won't change overnight but you've started by this poem. Thoughts are key. As your shadow follows yr body, as we think, so we become. A good 5* poem.

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