Tuesday, April 13, 2010

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He loves me, He loves me not, He loves me, He loves me not.
I watch as the pettles fall and land in the water.
I watch as the water ripples away.
I watch as my life flashes in front of me.
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Kelsea Osterman
hurting
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Anil Kumar 24 April 2011

I like the way you express your sadness of being hurt by comparing it with falling of petals.Nice way of expressing.

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C Note 13 April 2010

This is an interesting piece. The fact that you anticipate being hurt, but ask for in a unique way, as for a keepsake? Quite a thought..

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Chidori Storm 13 April 2010

Okay, did someone hurt you in some very bad way? It seems like you are in pain from something someone did to you.

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