Sunday, February 24, 2008

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You stood and watched
As your life was swept out to sea
The waves crashed over the pieces
Tumbling them round and round
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Diana Holinski
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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 March 2008

yet poignant by the reeks of anger, that turns to revenge as when love seems to be ruined by the rage, yet poerful imagery, unique way of curving by the ingenuity,10+, thanks for sharing

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William Jackson 24 February 2008

Cool. I like this one very much. Great metaphor.

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Diana Holinski

Diana Holinski

Waukeegan, IL
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