“piece” Of Mind Comments

Invent devices loving and kind Just by using a “piece” of mind..such a great message indeed my dear poet. yes we waste our energy in inventing and we destroy............. thank you for this great message. it is very true in todays context. tony

nice poem thought is very unique

Dear Akram, A good message through a beautiful poem, very relevant in these strife-torn times piece be with you give u ten for that one

Dear Akram, A good message through a beautiful poem, very relevant in these strife-torn times. Yes, unless man learns to heed the call of his heart and soul, his exercise of mind for inventions and discoveries, sans an ethical base and an ethos of humanity, carries him nowhere except on a path of doom. Love, my dear friend.

I love how this poem is so different. Its so unique and distinctive. Well done! ! !

I thought that it was very good and very clever. I am not big on rhyming in my poetry, but hey whatever works for you. It was a wonderful piece and I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work! ~Cheers

so much close to one of my poems unpoblihsed in poem hunter missing needs for consolation treats disregarding facts to be discreet losing sense for the sound of hearts when break thats great to think of world issues this much deeply best of my wishes

wonderful.go on in this way.but be free in verse..write from yoı ur inside

Nice compostion dear friend :) yes, the huiman race is much on the destructive course, and less on the GROWTH one; though the latter one contributes Infinitely to the UNIVERSAL PEACE. - shree

Peaceful lines spoken with soft tones brings to mind an overwhelming feeling of peace my brother, excellent piece 10 keep up the good work Bravo! !

if only we start using our piece of mind in a positive thoughts tahn there will be a peace in this world...a very good and thought provoking write, thanks for sharing 10+++ rgds asif

wowwwwwwwwwww i liked your 'piece of mind' -10 anjali