The melancholy within these veins,
The soft lament upon the breeze.
The daffodil wilting in the rain,
The tears bound for Sorrow's slave.
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Piece by piece! a good title you chose the right words I could see your pieces throughout the poem! You touched my inner! Bravo! 10
your poem is beatiful and sad too. you have a talent for putting your feeling in your words. it reaches off the page and it touches my heart. a ten! jen
wow every poem i read of yours they seem to get better and better, keep it going
wow...ur a great poet! very meaningful and deep. it gave me chills. all the best! Lizzy
A sad poem yet stemming from the heart! well-collected pieces and well-transformed into a poem.