Monday, May 5, 2008

Piece By Piece Comments

Rating: 4.5

The melancholy within these veins,
The soft lament upon the breeze.
The daffodil wilting in the rain,
The tears bound for Sorrow's slave.
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Floyd Zimmerman
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Beauty Philosophy 08 September 2009

A sad poem yet stemming from the heart! well-collected pieces and well-transformed into a poem.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 03 September 2009

Piece by piece! a good title you chose the right words I could see your pieces throughout the poem! You touched my inner! Bravo! 10

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Jen Capaldi 27 August 2009

your poem is beatiful and sad too. you have a talent for putting your feeling in your words. it reaches off the page and it touches my heart. a ten! jen

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Stacy Bea 07 May 2008

wow every poem i read of yours they seem to get better and better, keep it going

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Maria Isabel Oropeza 06 May 2008

wow...ur a great poet! very meaningful and deep. it gave me chills. all the best! Lizzy

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Floyd Zimmerman

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