Wednesday, July 11, 2012

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They say, 'a picture's worth a thousand words'.
A slight exageration, you might think?
This notion needs dispatching for the birds,
as scrutiny reveals the dubious link.
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Dan Reynolds
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Georgios Venetopoulos 30 January 2016

This is a finally written Iambic verse. It's true, laconic expressions contain more philosophical meaning.

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Iris Blue 16 December 2012

Your chosen form of a sonnet has the compactness to contain the idea behind the poem, but space enough for your philosophical narrative, development and commentary...the closing couplet is particularly strong and ties together the rest of the poem perfectly.

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Chuck Audette 12 July 2012

advertizing galore - a picture is best for we buy so much more when the model wears less.

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