Picture Perfect! Comments

An action packed poem! Enjoyed reading it

Great write on the vagaries of life. And the demands it make on our emotions. Strongly and powerfully expressed

" what is poetry? " - this beautiful piece is poetry: a spontaneous overflow of poewerful feelings. perfect pictures; powerful imagery!

Half of my life, I lived in my head, In shades of grey, white and red, Talked all to myself, all day, every day, Fiddling in the mutiny of rights and wrongs, ....fascinating expression! Your unexpressed words are so beautifully articulated in this elegant poem! (10)

Poignant rendition of words written with clarity of thought and mind. Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Ashika and do remain enriched.

I love the poem, making me think a lot about life and attitudes...just quote a few lines: A thought, just ruminates on and off, That one day for sure, I would talk my mind out, And heads would lend me an ear, That listens and not merely hear, - - - - -

But we live our life just in our heads, And parch in the pitch of a hoaxed life.. the heart has its reasons which the head may not understand, , , , , , , , , a fine poem on life and a bit philosophical..... thank you dear poetess. tony

We express less, we say nothing more, Live the picture perfect life galore, But we live our life just in our heads, And parch in the pitch of a hoaxed life. - - - - - - - - - - ] This entire poem is an extraordinary write and deserved this powerful and extraordinary closing. A thousand tens for a new talent on Poem Hunter! ! !

move from head to heart and LIVE! ! ! ! wonderful thoughts (head) now feel...

This is a wonderful poem -enjoyed reading it -I like especially the last stanza.10

Ashika, so good to be reading your poem. Yes, in life many things remain unexpressed. Thoughts and emotions remain bottled up and in a state of turmoil. That's life! But there is a way you can make life truly picture perfect! You can always express your innermost feelings through your poems. :) Lovely poem.....10

Yeah, sometimes we can't express our feelings to all. You are right when you say it is taught to us. A nice poem on the reality of our life. Well penned. Thanks for sharing.10+++

That i did care! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is a beautiful poem on life having thrilling expression with groovy collocation. I appreciate this poem. Thank u dear Ashika for sharing such a brilliant poem. Full vote.

The unclear fears, the unshared love, To let few know that I did care, My heart did long them more and more Beautiful poem dear.. the lines finger the strings of heart. And it's so thought provoking. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++

To form our lives we have some independence, we have to use that in proper ways to make our lives better; yes life will have some ups and downs situations, ........... excellent write, thanks for sharing the poem with us