Thursday, October 10, 2013

Picture Perfect Comments

Rating: 4.8

The baby sat joyfully on her lap
The mother on his tender thighs did tap
It tickled the boy to laugh and laugh
He was just one and a half
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2019

The blissful pair looked ever so cute Who on earth can their oneness thwart? It is a love that runs into eternity’s length A bond that yields to no brutal strength...... so touching and impressive. Yes, it is love that runs into eternity's length. The love among child and mother immeasurable. A beautiful poem is well executed.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2017

Enjoyed that sport! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 November 2013

An apt title, a perfect poem of happiness to make one's day! 10/10. 'Both invariably enjoyed that sport No one came in between their fun to abort; ' Yes, it's a sport that both the participants heartily enjoy, as do the onlookers, and it has no losers. 'It is a love that runs into eternity’s length A bond that yields to no brutal strength' Absolutely! 'On my mind’s lens is caught that image I laminated it to keep it from all damage' Thanks for sharing with us, the 'laminated picture'. It will lie undamaged in our hearts too.

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Heather Wilkins 01 November 2013

the bond between mother and child can never be broken. It is a special love no one can understand except a mother and child. lovely write

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Marvin Brato 21 October 2013

Fun to read... motherly love to children is amazing subject!

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Patricia Grantham 18 October 2013

You painted a wonderful picture of a mother and son that has a special bond. The harshness of time will not separate this tie. The special moments and great love will withstand the test. A loving and inspiring write full of devotion.

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Dinesan Madathil 13 October 2013

This duo of MOM and SON will ever live in our minds as the most realistic symbols of filial affection and angelic innocence respectively, Madam Valsa.

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Tajudeen Shah 13 October 2013

absolute serenity! what a write on a very common, humble but heavenly scene!

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Hans Vr 13 October 2013

Good, a pleasure to read and feel the warmth of the relationship

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David Wood 12 October 2013

A delightful poem Valsa, I really enjoyed reading it.

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Roseann Shawiak 11 October 2013

Beautiful poem. Children bring out the best in people. I can see the mom and child in my mind also, you preserved their image very well in this poem. It's laminated in poetry. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kavya . 11 October 2013

lovely write! a mother child relationship is thus.......undefinable, lovable, ever lasting..............loved the last two lines absolutely!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 11 October 2013

a picture etched forever, of a bond of all bonds! great write, Valsa.

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Danny Draper 10 October 2013

Beautiful snap shot of a mother and child bond perfectly preserved in this caring write.

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Shahzia Batool 10 October 2013

The poem is about the relation reflecting heavenly bliss...yes, it will not be damaged as you have laminated it and preserved it in your verses...In Virginia Woolf there is a scene in which Lily the artist was unsuccessfully trying to complete her picture with the mother and the child as the model, but she had a problem with her vision...you completed that picture here! ! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 October 2013

The bond of mother and the baby so beautifully described. I feel the baby thro' the lines you wrote Words are beautiful, worthy to quote.

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Tribhawan Kaul 10 October 2013

Bond between a mother and her child is beautifully weaved through words. Last two lines are like icing the cake.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 10 October 2013

A nice poem, depicting the love between the mother and child. On my mind’s lens is caught that image I laminated it to keep it from all damage. This picture was caught in the mind of observers nicely.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 October 2013

Valsa Ma'am while reading this a picture ran in my mind as if I am watching a movie beautiful for painting the poem with pictorial value thank Glory of Allah beautiful poem with heavenly relation 10

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Kee Thampi 10 October 2013

Mother on his tender thighs did tap It tickled the boy to laugh and laugh He was just one and a half The baby had such fairy grace Many a kiss she planted on his cherubic face Who on earth can their oneness thwart? It is a love that runs into eternity’s length Who on earth can their oneness thwart? It is a love that haunt me lot..... a new poem I like

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