Picture Perfect Poem by Aqua Flower

Picture Perfect

Rating: 5.0


My love, we have traveled so far
together year after year
but we still stay the same
nothing more, nothing gained
like a time capsule
everything remains
emotions frozen in time
we spin the wheel over and over
everything stays fine
as long as we don't color outside of the lines
love never dies, nor does it blossom
it is picture perfect
we live in a dream

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zumas Millamo 11 April 2023

Class poem: I quote ' as long as we don't color outside of the lines love never dies, nor does it blossom'

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Love, promises, life…" emotions frozen in time /we spin the wheel over and over" beautiful. Co, dear poet! This poem is among top 100 member poems today

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Rajan T Renganathan 12 April 2023

Everything is possible in this life specially with LOVE.

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Pallavi Tripathi 11 April 2023

You just added to the debate whether life is a simulation!

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M. Asim Nehal 11 April 2023

Very fortunate to travel so long with love/ loved ones...but the twist in the end 'In dreams' took it to another level of imagination. Excellent poem, Full ******

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2023

a time capsule everything remains emotions frozen in time....beautiful poetic expression. I am happy to read your poetry after such a long gap. Keep writing!

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