Wednesday, March 22, 2006

Picture On The Wall Comments

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My beautiful wife in the picture on the wall,
stares at me with the wide beautiful eyes,
greets me in the morning with the graceful smile,
welcomes me in the evening with her enchanting charm,
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Jay P Narain
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Robin Bennett 20 July 2012

Hope I may call you Jay, I just joined this particular site as a member this week. I have long since been writing on other forums. May I be honest for a moment? I am suprised at the sheer lack of great talent. With a ranking system, you would think the leader would be writing amazing poetry. Not so! You are one of four! that I have found that I truly am mezmerized by your words. Trust me I have searched. Your poetry is wonderful. I am adding you to my favorites! -Robin

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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