Sunday, December 3, 2006

Picture Of Confidence Comments

Rating: 5.0

In Bermuda
shorts on a cold morning
he wheeled his shopping cart,
a little recklessly,
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Max Reif
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And a perfectly penned piece it is. Love the zoom-in, zoom-out snapped depiction of a 'here but for the grace of god' scenario, adeptly told quasi-objectively, but the eye for the detail forcing a second thought, adoption of unusual perspective, admiration even perhaps, on the part of the reader. Grand write Max. t x

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R H 03 December 2006

Lovely piece of observation packed into this little snapshot. Confidently penned. Justine

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Goldy Locks 03 December 2006

would have perhaps put 'shorts' on the first line so as not to confuse locale with apparel; but for sure liked the essence of this. observant & calming. Sus

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