Tuesday, June 2, 2015

Picnic On The Hills Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dark mountain road climbs its way
Like a great snake winds round its prey
Shining black in the simmering sun
Spotted by wayside trees on its run
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Rajagopalan Kumar
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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 September 2020

A well executed poem. Truly fabulous....5 stars*****

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Rajagopalan Kumar 15 October 2020

Thanks for your appreciation. Shows your love for Nature also. It s a great thing to appreciate nature

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Valsa George 02 June 2015

Enjoyed this beautiful mountain trek with picturesque description of the scenes around! Now and then, a picnic to the hills Keeps away the doctor pills and the bills......... Endorse these lines!

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Rajagopalan Kumar 03 June 2015

Thanks for the appreciation... Please read my other poems also. Hope you will enjoy them. Once again thanks for your encouraging words

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 June 2015

A Wonderful Picnic on hills is gone recollecting the sweet moment on hill station as the morning sun beckons call to earthly duties but memories still want to linger on the worthwhile blissful moment spent on beautiful hills station. A beautiful poem that keep ones memories lingering to the sweet moment spent on hill station. Beautiful presentation with bountiful imagery attract the readers attention. Loved reading it.

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Rajagopalan Kumar 03 June 2015

Thanks for your comments and encouraging words...

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