Thursday, December 22, 2005

Pickup Lines And Lipstick Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sometimes while delivering pizzas in
Gainesville, random girls would ask me
To pick them up and take them with me
Dressed up to go dancing with
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Robert Rorabeck
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Mary Nagy 03 January 2006

This was great. It makes me think of my brother thinking he'll meet a ''good woman'' at the bars........ I have just become aware of your poems and I'm really enjoying them! You have a great way of really getting the picture across through your poems. Very nice. sincerely, Mary

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A.p. Sweet 22 December 2005

Very well put, it almost has a Bukowski feel to it, I like it. I really like the imagery it conjures up in my head.

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