Monday, June 3, 2013

Pickpockets. Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you first put your arms around me,
I could feel the warmth of you.
I could trace the beat of your heart.
When your lips brushed mine,
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Owain Glyn
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Danny Draper 11 June 2013

Love does seem like the work of spies at times, different agendas and different sides, but when it is lime the movie Mr and Mrs Smith, then it is too good. I wonder if they ever met on that bridge and noticed beneath in the matte silk silence, two ships passing with nonchalant disregard.

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Valerie Dohren 04 June 2013

A heart exchange, how lovely. Well thought out, very novel.

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