Friday, October 28, 2016

Pickled Scenery Comments

Rating: 5.0

A labrador barks at a passing stranger
as the pond geese honk sensing some danger
Trudges back home a rangy lone ranger.
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Unwritten Soul 13 July 2017

Thats true, great thoughts! Rhyming n choosen words with positive insight, make it a perfect way to believe i n Him, beautiful poem! ! ! !

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Laurie Van Der Hart 06 February 2017

Fantastic poem! It's like a time-lapse scan over the earth, full of God's creations. Thank you for writing it. You might enjoy mine that carry a similar thought and both were written in Tanzania - A Leakey Theory and The Crater.

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Kim Barney 30 November 2016

Very nice poem, and so true. I love these lines: Admit it O' mankind no one can ever be at par with your and my versatile Creator We are not here by chance. We do have a creator and we will meet Him again after this life.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 December 2016

So true and sincere about The Creator. Thanx soo much for a comment that makes me smile deeply.

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Kee Thampi 18 November 2016

Dolphins perform in the aquatic circus Kids count on the time-old abacus All in all the miracle of creation's fabulous nature with a love write

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Christopher Tye 31 October 2016

Wonderful poem, creation has given us an extremely varied world of nature.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 October 2016

Thanx soo much poet for yor comment. Now that is a scientifically accurate statement the way u put it. Cheers.

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Chan Mongol 30 October 2016

You are so creative that I must admire your vision! WOW! Your descriptions are so lively! Keep it up Poet! I am rating 10 for this masterpiece! Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 29 October 2016

Isn't that the truth? Whenever I see the immensity of the universe, I think of God and am in awe. Whenever I have cause to reflect on the molecular level of life, I think of God and am in awe of God. Well written signpost pointing out the hand of God on everything we see and don't see. 10.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 October 2016

Aw thanx soo much for yor great intellectual review and thoughts on this. Only the thinker acknowledges God scientifically.

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Valsa George 29 October 2016

You have created a wonderful picture gallery of assorted scenes from Nature.....! The flora and fauna in their wide variety come alive through your lines....! We are also made to wonder at the great craftsmanship of the Creator! Enjoyed this spicy pickle.... So nice to read you after such a long time..... Zaynub!

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Kelly Kurt 28 October 2016

Evolution has gifted us with quite the diversity of life; spiders, giraffes, bacteria, plankton, fungi. It is truly a pickled scene

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 October 2016

Thanx for your comment even though I don't find any empirical evidence for evolution in all my research and others research.

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Spock The Vegan 28 October 2016

Very nice poem about nature and the role of God. It's unusual that most verses have 3 rhymes. Nicely done.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 October 2016

Thanx intellectual poet.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 October 2016

Thanx intellectual poet for only the true thinker acknowledges God.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 October 2016

Thanx intellectual poet, for only the true sincere thinker acknowledges God

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2016

Nature! ! With the ways of mankind on earth. News around the world! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2016

The billions of species is far too extraordinary. Nature holds wonderful sequences. Wisely penned poem! ..10

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