Monday, August 26, 2013

Pickle Comments

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Clang of metal on glass,
a tiny trident pierces the green skin.
fat drops run down the weapon,
and splash onto the table,
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Chloe Coleman
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Adeline Foster 19 September 2013

Love that pickle, Chloe, and the poem. Try mine - Flies Flies Flies - Adeline

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Bri Edwards 05 September 2013

this made me smile at the end. a nice little tickle-the-pickle poem. thanks for sharing. i can visualize the murderous munching. :) i put it in MyPoemList it tasted so good. i prefer sweet pickles as in chloe's poem, but if you pickle lovers can stand dill pickles and want another pickle poem, i invite you to indulge in my: 96 Little Dill Pickles.... [Food; Nature; Imagination; Personal] online 2/10/2013

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Ruth Walters 26 August 2013

I do like a pickle myself :)

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