Sunday, September 13, 2015

Picking Up Pieces Comments

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Reality hitting hard at times, knocking one to the
ground, taking away our breath.

Dreams being confiscated, trampled upon, leaving
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Amitava Sur 13 September 2015

Man ultimately lives on hope and faith. Without hope this is very difficult to live this human life with its pain and strife.

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Fabrizio Frosini 13 September 2015

Hi RoseAnn, I've translated your poem, but I'm not completely sure about the exact meaning (in your last stanza) of your words: ''knowing that we are going to resurrect every particle / of our puzzle, attaining our goals and dreams forever. '' Maybe you'll be so kind to give me the right interpretation.. For the moment, here is my Italian version: Speranza e fede sfidano le ragioni della realtà, confortandoci con la resurrezione di ogni particella del mistero che siamo, 'sì da conseguire i nostri obiettivi e sogni per sempre. Cheers

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M Asim Nehal 13 September 2015

Hope and faith challenging the causes of reality.................Superb.....10++

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