Saturday, February 22, 2014

Picking Strawberries Comments

Rating: 3.9

absence of nourishment
rakes upon the soul
in even well-spaced lines
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Anthony Burkett
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Mihaela Pirjol 12 August 2014

Great imagery...the sweetness of each word.....Lovely!

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Hans Vr 29 March 2014

Agree with Joseph, excellent

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Kanav Justa 11 March 2014

, , , , you have decorated this poem with wonderful lines, , , , liked it, , ,

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Poetheart Morgan 24 February 2014

Wandering with myself....how many strawberries were needed to do such poem...tasty Poet...very tasty....and delicate like the Poet.

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Joseph Anderson 23 February 2014

Your imagery runs deep and wide. A glorious write about a delicious delicacy. A 10 for this

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