absence of nourishment
rakes upon the soul
in even well-spaced lines
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Wandering with myself....how many strawberries were needed to do such poem...tasty Poet...very tasty....and delicate like the Poet.
Your imagery runs deep and wide. A glorious write about a delicious delicacy. A 10 for this
Great imagery...the sweetness of each word.....Lovely!