More and more it feels like the stresses of life are clouding me, like a thick wall of fog through which I can barely see
It feels like all this stress is strangling me, help somebody please! It feels as though I can barely breathe!
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I really like this poem, the words you chose show a lot of feeling. You got the feeling of complete despair across to the reader. Either way, you end up dead, or so it seems to be true in this world. Very nice job. Keep it up!