Picking Daisies In The Sun, Love Poems Comments
I tossed a love poem to the sea,
I told it swim, my words, I let you free.
They came to rest upon an isle's golden sand,
they declared not that they were written by my hand.
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A true final: ............gathered all my daisies round, and fashioned him a living crown............Unbelievable romantic!
A poet like Captain Cur coming down the aisle with his romantic Classic Love poems. WOW! The archaic words and lines have done their duty. A grand mesmerizing feast while reading this lovely romantic song.5 Stars!
I loved the flow and beauty of the poem like fresh daisies dancing in the sun.5 stars
A marvellous poem Captain Cur! A love poem tossed into the sea with spectacular images and metaphors so beautiful.
A splendid romantic poem with great rhyme and rhythm... fascinating poetic expression! Just beautiful...5 stars
love cap curr when ur relaxed do read my poems u may love em
'I know one whose heart is free will give her love to the guileless sea' Wonderful line, my friend. Here is a great love poem. The sea goer's heart, his love 10+
This is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression. My favorite lines are.... I read a love poem in the sand that wrote itself with unknown hand. I felt although a mystery those words of love were meant for me. I looked upon the glistening waves and heard his song and said his name.
Ever So Captivating! ! ! ! ! Just Beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! Wow! ! ! ! ! Beyond Words And Numbers! ! ! ! ! Breath Taking! ! ! ! !
i appreciate this wonderfully expressed verse a lot. a intense write woven with craft. nice write, keep writing.
A beautiful love story nicely written. Each stanza is a story within itself.
each is a lovely poem within its self. A beautiful story of love, nicely writtren
A beautiful composition is penned in a classic manner. Love is reciprocated through mighty waves and words of poesy transfer into daisies....a poem...a wreath, it's a lovely write.
The reciprocality of two hearts in love! Even in alien shores, true love identifies itself! So very imaginative and beauteously romantic! ! Greatly enjoyed! !
A poem on the bottle it found a love. Unknown and perfect! That is the way i see! ! ! Beautiful story
What lovely words to your gentile poem. A great piece of work that is soft focus yet lively.
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8/5/2025 4:33:47 AM # 1.0.0
The first line can be extended into a thesis! I find great deapth in your poetry dear captain!