If you take my poetry
like the flame of a candle
which burns only for you
will be feel the pain that's in me.
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I play with words and write poem. I'm paying back a living account. I'm not looking for a comfimation. I've always believed in your lies.... beautiful poem
You returned my lost letters but you took my sweet Eternity.... I'm not looking for a comfimation. I've always believed in your lies.... Lovely poetic expressions.
A wonderful and thought provoking poem. I concur with the beautiful comments of Poetess Hazel. There is deepness in every line of the whole write especially the opening and second stanza. Great write well crafted.
Intriguing and fascinating write, I love the deepness in every line as you fight to become the winner in a situation that you have no control of! Great write!
Thanks. It was a fight between a poetess and a poet. It has always been a draw and seven years, we have played a tie break. This game is like a lottery and I lost one month ago.
I play with words and write poem. I'm paying back a living account. I'm not looking for a comfimation. I've always believed in your lies... very fine poem indeed dear poet. tony
This poem has arrived in a class of its own.