Friday, January 25, 2019

Pick Me Up Poetry ~ Pokupi Moju Poeziju Comments

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If you take my poetry
like the flame of a candle
which burns only for you
will be feel the pain that's in me.
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Jankovic Zoran
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Jane Campion 10 June 2019

This poem has arrived in a class of its own.

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Prabir Gayen 16 February 2019

I play with words and write poem. I'm paying back a living account. I'm not looking for a comfimation. I've always believed in your lies.... beautiful poem

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

You returned my lost letters but you took my sweet Eternity.... I'm not looking for a comfimation. I've always believed in your lies.... Lovely poetic expressions.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 February 2019

A wonderful and thought provoking poem. I concur with the beautiful comments of Poetess Hazel. There is deepness in every line of the whole write especially the opening and second stanza. Great write well crafted.

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Hazel Durham 28 January 2019

Intriguing and fascinating write, I love the deepness in every line as you fight to become the winner in a situation that you have no control of! Great write!

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Jankovic Zoran 28 January 2019

Thanks. It was a fight between a poetess and a poet. It has always been a draw and seven years, we have played a tie break. This game is like a lottery and I lost one month ago.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 January 2019

I play with words and write poem. I'm paying back a living account. I'm not looking for a comfimation. I've always believed in your lies... very fine poem indeed dear poet. tony

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