Tuesday, August 29, 2006

Pick-Hole Nicole And Smelly Kelly Comments

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Nicole is so lovely
But she always picks her nose.
Thats why her nick name is pick-hole Nicole!
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K. Jared Hosein 29 August 2006

A rather pedestrian and uninteresting piece that does not convince me that much effort was put into it. Improvements can be made by improving your vocabulary, using some sort of device or doing something other than stating the obvious - if you know what I mean. - K.

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