Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Piano Afternoon Comments

Rating: 3.8

A cottage in the sun,
my lovely one,
we could saunter gently
to a gazebo in the park,
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Uriah Hamilton
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Roseann Shawiak 04 August 2013

When I first read it several times the beginning seemed disconnected until you summed it up in a piano afternoon. It left me wondering what would happen next then a reoccurring sadness touched my heart. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 17 July 2013

but if I could kiss you mouth for one delicate moment in this fragile and fleeting summer, I will accept any reoccurring sadness that befalls me i loved this densely romantic poem - love in fleeting time!

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