''Physician, Heal Thyself'' Comments

I think this has a very powerful message, Mary...and again, you did it with rhyme which still sort of floors me! I love the message. I think we go into certain disciplines because of the fires we've been through in our lives. I can totally relate to this poem.

search for someone who appreciates the healer in you....because what i sense is a good, warm hearted one...good luck

Mary, I think you would be even better in the rhyming type poems if you used a pattern with the number of syllables. Say 9 8 9 8 or all 8's etc. Know what I mean? I am not trying to be unnice. H

Very nicely done Mary. An appropriate lesson to learn. Rusty

sometimes I think I only write in order to give myself a pep talk.

Beautiful poem, Mary. Hugs to you, CJ