O’ you my darling from back home pind
khadee si qasm, sara tun love and apni jind
oh my countrymen poor souls ki jano tussi
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It's a nice mishmash, a wonderful combo of Punjabi and English, neither feels awkward nor make stumble on any phrase. It records some fond memories and evokes nostalgia...a rose-tinted!
loved this fun poem. i read this so many times and enjoyed every time. And the title is eye-catching! ! ! i enjoyed each and every line especially the end is amazing. I call such poetry DELICIOUS POETRY when you have all the ingredients to enjoy every bit of it! ! ! LOVED the BLENDING n it's brilliantly done... GREAT WORK :)))