Monday, April 13, 2009

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lets head down to the beach
we can watch the waves wash sand from our feet
stare at the lights on the horizon
are they ships that are leaving or just arivin'
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Jordan Crider
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Jordan Salinas 07 May 2009

Jordan... Come back to class. We need your presence

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Aylissa Ramirez 01 May 2009

i really like the slant rhyme

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CoreyLeigh Mason 28 April 2009

The water arts really makes me like it. It's sounds like an old 50's song.

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Ashleigh Michaud 15 April 2009

wow! that was pretty cool ;)

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