Saturday, April 6, 2019

Photography ~ Fotografija Comments

Rating: 3.9

Photography

She woke up and looked out the window:
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Jankovic Zoran
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Nabakishore Dash 20 August 2022

wonderful write.

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Nice poem, beautiful photograph. Congratulations on Member POD. Well-deserved. Top score

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 April 2020

A marvelous poem on a dear one with sweet complaints about the nature. Well deserved poem of the day. Congrats for POD selection twice.

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Keith Brown 28 April 2020

Nice poem cougars on pod, you may like too read my poems, shutter seed and through the lense. Cheers kb

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 April 2020

she awoke and looked to outside, since she is a paintress, she only takes a photo then go to sleep/ to dream again. He writes the poem based upon the view of that moment and dedicates the poem to her. This must be love. Thank you so much for sharing, beautiful sunset and Congratulations on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, hooray for Jankovic Sir.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 April 2020

error: in the first line: .............then GOES to sleep/ to dream again.............thank you!

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 28 April 2020

Beautifully depicted a lazy poet; painter. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations for the POD.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 April 2020

The women took the phone and make a photo, beautiful game of impossible love. She turned and continued to dream...../// really a beautiful poem; and great congrats for beings selected this beautiful poem as second time POD

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Bernard Snyder 28 April 2019

Wonder piece of writing here. Impressive. Well deserved as 'POD', and congrats.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 April 2019

A magnificent poem of the day. Congrats, sir Jankovic, for being chosen.....10++++++++++

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Practicing Poetess 28 April 2019

Easier to take a photo than to write! Congratulations, Zoran, for being chosen as Member poem of the Day!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 April 2019

As regards poetry, I concur with the wonderful comments of the great Poet, Sandra Feldman. Artists can never be forced or pushed. Poetry has many intricacies to consider and involves a.lot of thinking. A fine and fascinating poem.A one of a kind thought and theme. Congratulations for having this poem chosen as POD.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2019

Though she knows how to write yet she is lazy but she is honoured as she is A good painter. Beautifully inscribed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 April 2019

There is always a time for everything. Photography must be executed in the earliest in some instances. When the opportunity knocks, it must be captured right away otherwise it will be gone in an instant.

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Julia Luber 28 April 2019

Slightly comical and charming about somebody taking a cell phone shot when there would be all that poetry to be written about that mesmerizing view. What our real lives are like.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 April 2019

A beautiful poem depicting the traits of the nature of an equally beautiful woman. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Rahman Henry 28 April 2019

wonderful poem and excellent translation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 April 2019

With trepidation! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 April 2019

beautiful game of impossible love. She turned and continued to dream. //// a photo she took and dreamed a love but impossible love that was because of love on virtual flash light photography!

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Manpreet Singh 28 April 2019

I like ur imagination but you must carefully observe the punctuation and grammar. Like " Frightened" isn't a verb. Good imagery by the way.

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Kim Barney 28 April 2019

He didn't use it as a verb. He used it as an adjective (which it is) but he should have used the verb IS in front of it: One might think that she is frightened...

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Manpreet Singh 28 April 2019

Punctuation is important

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Jankovic Zoran 29 April 2019

Once upon a time my father telling me that I speak English as Tarzan. I did not make much progress. I corrected the error. Thank you for suggestions and comments.

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Sandra Feldman 28 April 2019

Unusual case, it seems, Photography a sort -cut To preserve dreams. A new " artistic system I suppose? but if it works for her, all the better. Artists can't be pushed or forced. Interesting poem, quite different.

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