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Silence has broken, then comes the first rain,
Along with sweet memories of laughters and pain.
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This is a lovely poem... Katherine. The pining and sadness so evident. Thank you for sharing.
I am impressed with your poetic talent. There is no doubt that though you are not adept in the English language, the emotions you convey through those four stanzas are brought out wonderfully by the words you use and the tone in which they are said. There is certainly a depth of feeling and the poetic expressions (though expressed in unpolished English - English not being your native tongue, I presume) are apt and the loss of the one you love is clearly felt in this marvellous poem. I am sure it would have been even more wonderful in the Filipino language/Tagalog. I rate it a 10, considering the age at which you wrote this.
Wow, I'm speechless, all I can say is daghang salamat (in bisaya language it's thank you very much) :)
Very Nice expressive Poem indeed. yearning to stop the Time.., .. and very touching.. thinking of lost Love that one is trapped with in a Photograph. Certainly deserve a 10+++, for all the depth of feelings narrated! Thank you for sharing!
Such a huge talent manifest in your young self, dear Katherine Pinero, as depicted hereof. It's 8.am here. You just made my day with this. Thanks. A deserving 10+++