Wednesday, February 4, 2009

** Phoenix (Nics?) Cry Comments

Rating: 2.7

Formed in untouchable flaming blare of anger
screaming in tremendous roar of billions in thunders and lightnings,
symbolizes strength, power and excellence
laid upon in my lamenting weep of pain!
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Ency Bearis 05 February 2009

great write....can feel the emotion of plea..touching...10

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Catrina Heart 04 February 2009

Burn my soul, warm my heart, give me strength oh, Phoenix, hear my sorrowful cries, see, I now openly stretching widely both my arms trigger my spirit again to fly and seek with hopeful fire! ------ such a moving and powerful words to plea...to be like a phoenix. Wonderful composition my friend...10

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