Phoenix Comments

Ahhh, the proverbial Rise of the Phoenix....This is beautifully wrtitten young lady, with an eloquence of pomp, prowess, and poeticmajesty, as well as it's inveterated philosophic underpinnings...I like it...It sparkles...as you do...and will continue to! F j R 2009

A lot of food for thought, as usual, Vidi. Thanks.

only when the soul comes alive..... lovely one...

This is a very nice poem which talks about characteristics which are unidentified in a person as the qualities which are to be appreciated are seldom appreciated in this worldly world where goodness is turning to be rarest of rare qualities.

these words are alimentation for the soul the essence of truth well expressed

A thought provoking poem written with fine imagery used and nice tone of words...Like any other values, trust is being earned from what you have planted...If you have planted the seed of honesty you'll profit the virtue of trust and respect...Thanks for the wonderful read. A phoenix burns itself and from ashes it comes back to life...10+++

A most interesting poem. I am not sure I understand it all. But what I did understand was wonderful ! Thoughtful ! GW62

VIDI, it is a good poem! It gives us food for thought! We must first learn to trust ourselves before we trust others, - and finally God! Thanks for the New Years message sent earlier! - Raj Nandy

An excellent poem, Vidi. Very often a 'trusty' is not recognized as such from the beginning. Like the phoenix, truth and honesty eventually 'rises from the ashes' to reveal itself. Thanks. A 10. Richard

pleasant and much true....well penned vidi......lines with full of emotional message.......10+ sebastine

Beautiful and symbolic use of the myth of Phoenix, the mythological bird. In continuity and resurrection of life there is a rare chance of any change in term of trust and honesty.......A good piece of write Vidi and 10 for you.

What a great message to the suffocating society! Great write Congrats!

A phoenix from Hell emerged in Heaven.Nothin is impossible except death! !

truth and honesty, rare qualities suspicion and doubt abound in reality. i really liked the last three lines.well Vidi, how many can look at themselves with honesty, so where does trust and truth stand a chance, great thought of an enquiring mind, perplexed.so good to read yoy after a long haitus10 happy new year mamta

wow...... I truly loved it. 10

truth is the face of trustworthiness and those who are dark minded face less fearfully shy away from the brightness it spreads...beautiful poem Vidi...a 'phoenix' in the ph poem sky...10