Friday, June 19, 2009

Phoenix Comments

Rating: 5.0

In wakeful dreams and nights full of longing
Our lips touch, and I feel the subtle flame
Beneath your skin quiver and become fire;
And every moment we're apart, though none
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J. P. Dullahan
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Rita Hawkins 21 June 2009

Sweet and simple love poem. Even though it is not long you still manage to get your point across. Great job.

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