Saturday, December 29, 2007

Phlegm Comments

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and they summoned
said the rhyme from coaster
to this final acquisition
is it or is it not
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Ivan Donn Carswell 29 December 2007

Celine, this poem is based on a complex metaphor which I find intriguing. The enabling imagery is wholly original, 'custom gathering of people', 'crowded space of reign with words', 'divided level of relative constanance'. It is not easily grasped and I don't pretent to understand, but I get the phlegm of the idea. I hope the cough brings me relief too. Rgds, Ivan

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