Philosophy Of The False Dawn Comments

Destined to rise once again From the trance of ephemeral dawn wowwwwww ephemeral dawn-- the sun will rise again excellent philosophical write another +++++10 as always anjali

Its a false dawn at the east while the sun always shine's upon the west....If the world is one society the west is the almost perfect high class, and the east seems like middle class...with its own miseries, short commings, and a struggle on day to day basis waiting for the dawn of change...which seems never to come.! ! ! ! ! ! ! A multidimensional vision...this poem is! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

you emotionally described the day routine life between sunrise and sunset, you shows the picture reality of struggle and the human race misguided and killing each other by the name of........ nice poem and brilliant write.10+++ from lago

great piece...great thoughts that touches the reality of life..... the daily routine of the dawn....then only to find out that life doesn't change for the better...as what reality is showing us....but something to be thankful on every dawn in our life is that, we still find ourselves breathing....we are still alive with the grace of God...and we still struggle to continue to savor every sunset and every dawn in our life.... your piece leads us to reflect.... 10++++

great philosophical piece woven with nature images and wisdom...Thats the reality about life....we are created with desires and motivations, being affected by the caused, as there's light in the day and darkness in the night, all in balance though ironic in a way...Great poetic composition...10+++