Discomfort
Is a unique measurement
Of self-esteem.
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yes...this 'itch' signals that something has to be done from the micro to macro, to be able to transcend, from infancy to adulthood...
Good thing it is only 10 AM. I have the rest of the day to delve into this philosophy and test its premise. I don't disagree but want to think about all of its ramifications. There are some things we cannot control which cause us discomfort, so how do we deal with those? Is it a question of mind over matter or allowing time for disappation.
love this poem man. i see the point and i agree. i freaking hate teletubbies too
Wonderfully philosophical and introspective but much wisdom from such young shoulders (have you been here before David?) Excuse the condescending tone, not meant at all, I am just wowed by this poem's prodfundity! Love it.. HG: -) xx
My comments are usually not as 'deep' as the rest.... but what a freakingly clever poem! Logically set out to the conclusion.... you are good, Mr Mr!
Philosophical Amusings... I'm sorry... I just think... discomfort... one really should go to the toilet... especially at 10.00 am if you are at work... it can be a wee relief on the ha ha you see.. aroha!
'Discomfort Is a unique measurement Of self-esteem...' ........................... David, Really it is a strong way for measurement own advantage... Interesting and necessary philosophy... Tsira
David this stream of philosophical consciousness flows with a thoughtful wind behind it. You're right. Self esteem (and the self-discipline that it engenders) is the most precious gift, without which life becomes one hard slog. AS one who is attracted to souls crippled by this affliction, spending years attempting to provide the unconditional loving denied them early in life, I identify strongly with this poem. As one who has an abiding love of words, I admire it's economy and well crafted use of language. As one with a sense of humor (without which my nurture of such souls would be impossible) I particularly enjoyed your 'rap and telly tubbies' line. Excellent poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Musings that have the reader nodding in agreement here...the opening statement is explored, ruminated and projected as the poem expands until a satisfying conclusion is reached. justine.
These musings of yours David certainly make the neurones work. Maybe not at precisely 10 AM but all the same...great stuff. Thanks.
Very deep very thought provoking and a little bit dark nice work Thanks Nik
Interesting conclusion, persuasively reached...it's hard to disagree. t x
the open lines made me think a lot...I think this is a materialistic point of view but so real in every aspect of life
Amazing work. Love the witticism and piercing outlook on self-esteem and discomfort.