We keep peddling the empty promise
For the life of prosperity
to soothe the wounds of the heart
Heart respites no mercy until the bitter end.
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A wonderful and insightful write on life. The opening lines and the rest of the write are deep analysis of life itself. So very true words that touch one's heart and mind. Brilliantly penned.
Philosophy of life nicely penned. Meditation is by choice not by force or compulsion.
Life seems totally disoriented With no understanding just thoughts.moral.. ethics, justice....... we are really disoriented as you present your poem dear poet. thank u for this eye-opener. tony
HAD U SEEN MY GARDEN POEM AND UR NAME MENTIONED LIFE'S IMAGE WOULD HAVE BEEN TOTALLY DIFFERENT NOW M A N KINDLY C HAPPY U WILL BE POETRY IS LIFE FOR THEE AS IT IS FOR ME- - - - - - - - -_____==================
Thank u so much, The poet poet, But you forgot to write about my above poem whether you liked it or not? ?
Life seems totally disoriented/With no understanding just thoughts......touching expression! Excellent work....10
You sir are sincerely visually a deep sensed poet unlike me I am only off the cuff mostly