Friday, January 25, 2019

Philosophical ~ Life's Journey Quartain Comments

Rating: 5.0

We keep peddling the empty promise
For the life of prosperity
to soothe the wounds of the heart
Heart respites no mercy until the bitter end.
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 December 2019

You sir are sincerely visually a deep sensed poet unlike me I am only off the cuff mostly

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 January 2019

A wonderful and insightful write on life. The opening lines and the rest of the write are deep analysis of life itself. So very true words that touch one's heart and mind. Brilliantly penned.

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Deepak S S 25 January 2019

Philosophy of life nicely penned. Meditation is by choice not by force or compulsion.

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2019

Thank u so much Depak ss

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 January 2019

Life seems totally disoriented With no understanding just thoughts.moral.. ethics, justice....... we are really disoriented as you present your poem dear poet. thank u for this eye-opener. tony

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2019

Thank u so much My friend Dr Tony B.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 January 2019

HAD U SEEN MY GARDEN POEM AND UR NAME MENTIONED LIFE'S IMAGE WOULD HAVE BEEN TOTALLY DIFFERENT NOW M A N KINDLY C HAPPY U WILL BE POETRY IS LIFE FOR THEE AS IT IS FOR ME- - - - - - - - -_____==================

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2019

Thank u so much, The poet poet, But you forgot to write about my above poem whether you liked it or not? ?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 January 2019

Life seems totally disoriented/With no understanding just thoughts......touching expression! Excellent work....10

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2019

Thank u so much Dr Dillip.

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