Sunday, March 9, 2008

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Once a bird was claimed in wild fire
Unaware that its heat,
Would, eventually,
Have him, raised substantially
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Christopher Fladd
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Subbaraman N V 09 March 2008

A very interesting write! Thanks for sharing a nice poem!

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Excellent free-style verse....your structure flows in cascade, like a waterfall into a waiting rivermouth...Well Done, young man! ~ FjR ~

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Christopher Fladd

Christopher Fladd

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