Saturday, February 13, 2010

Phenomenal Phenomena Comments

Rating: 5.0

Twilight stalking the night, predatory stance
Opens door for velvet blackness to advance
Stars hypnotized in lunar trance
Ideal setting for earthly romance
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Joshua C. Whiting
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C Toebe 13 February 2010

An other worldliness to this poem that I like.

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Joshua Whiting 13 February 2010

I like the alliteration. Overall other worldliness feel that I like.

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