Friday, April 21, 2017

Phenomenal Man Comments

Rating: 4.5

He has a broad heart.

Possessing four chambers.
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Jazib Kamalvi
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Konab Ghumman 12 March 2019

He never wastes letters. He never wastes words. He never wastes phrases. What a beautiful creation!

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 March 2019

Thanks for your continuous support, Konab Ghumman.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 21 November 2018

He never losses heart He never losses art A phenomenal poem indeed Thanks for sharing

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2018

Thank you so much, Binayakumar, for your nice comment.

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Chris Embrick 13 March 2018

All noble attributes to attain. It is a difficult order to fill but we all must try. I think because each of us has flaws, life is more interesting. A great, thoughtful poem full of wisdom. The greatest attributes of life come from the heart.10+++

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 March 2018

I appreciate your nice words. Many thanks, Chris.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2017

Dear poet, you have sketched the portrait of a man who is phenomenally phenomenal! I found a poem in different gender in contrast to Maya's 'Phenomenal woman' in different tone in different taste! You have penned it very nicely dear poet! Thank you for sharing..10

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 December 2017

Thank you very much, Dr. Dillip, for your nice words.

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Nayyab Younas Khan 30 November 2017

No doubt about it God made man phenomenal.......May we use all our capabilites righteously......Thanks for this nice piece of poetry.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2017

So nice of you for the nicer feedback.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2017

A real hero is he who... He never loses temper. He never loses heart. He never loses hope. He never loses art. He never wastes letters. He never wastes words. He never wastes phrases. And never a sentence. He never wastes a moment. And never an utterance. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 November 2017

Thanks for this honour, Mahakul sir.

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Diane Montemayor 15 September 2017

Dear Sir Jazib, Phenomenal Man- Real hero is measured by the strength of his heart.... Loved it... Sincerely, diane

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 September 2017

I appreciate your appreciation, Diane. Thanks

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Shimizu Mizuhala 30 June 2017

A series of sentences, analysis of a class of people. I can not fully understand, but this poem is very powerful. Thank you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 June 2017

So nice of you for so insightful comments

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Unwritten Soul 15 June 2017

A Phenomenal Man never do wrong but if he does, he learned and fix it greater, A Phenomenal Man is not rely on physical that is strong, but wisdom love patience faith in his four-chambered heart!

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 June 2017

Thank you so much...

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Chinedu Dike 13 June 2017

Beautiful rhetorical poem, well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. Sounds like the exact man. Thanks for sharing Jazib.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 June 2017

Grateful for your appreciation. Thanks

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Rehnuma Tarannum 01 May 2017

Thats very nice. true picture of a herat that never commits. keep up the good works.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 May 2017

Thank you for appreciation.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 April 2017

That's a true pen picture of an ideal man, a nice write.

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 April 2017

I am really thankful.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 April 2017

sublime, imaginative and elevating.. thank you dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 April 2017

I am grateful to you for such literary comments.

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Bharati Nayak 25 April 2017

Attributes of a real hero- - - - - - That he is less communal. The angels are saying. That he is broad minded. He never loses temper. He never loses heart. He never loses hope. He never loses art. He never wastes letters. He never wastes words. He never wastes phrases. And never a sentence. He never wastes a moment. And never an utterance. - - - - - - - - - - -A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 April 2017

Thanks for kind comments..

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Dr. Yahya 22 April 2017

I have never seen such impressive, effective, imaginative and sublime prose poem here. A great symbolic poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 April 2017

You possess an extreme penetrating eye at PH. I am grateful for such literary comments.

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