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She is the spotless girl, Longingly waiting for him.
It is the life in whirl,
That is entangling him.
She is an innocent girl,
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Dear Torabi! Thank you so much for your comments. Thanks again for your nice suggestion.
refined use of language Jazib Kamalvi. Great work. If you don't mind would you check out my poems and give a review on them?
She was not on date, But he's a phenomenal poet. What a poem!
Thank you so much, Aniruddha Pathak, for your lovely philosophical extention.
I quite liked this. Sorry not good at explaining why. Had an innocent appeal. I rhyme too!
She is a heavenly girl, He is an earthly lad. He is a son of Eve, Adam is not her dad. She is phenomenal doll, He is phenomenal man. I am a poet of call, I am phenomenal fan........so touching. A beautiful poem shared. Thanks for posting.
Many thanks, Olga. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thanks again.
She is a heavenly girl, He is an earthly lad. He is a son of Eve, Adam is not her dad. She is phenomenal doll, He is phenomenal man. I am a poet of call, I am phenomenal fan. -An excellent write dear poet! I like your style of writing..Many congratulations! !
I appreciate your poetic insight and refined sense of appreciation. Thanks Dillip K S.
What an impressive piece of poetry. Thank you for writing it.
He is phenomenal man and you are a poet of nature. Revisiting this poem we get happiness. This is brilliant
She is a heavenly girl, He is an earthly lad. He is a son of Eve, Adam is not her dad. She is phenomenal doll, He is phenomenal man. I am a poet of call, I am phenomenal fan... loved these lines. Beautiful poem with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.
He is a son of Eve, Adam is not her dad. She is phenomenal doll, .........................great.
Beautiful picture of a woman and of a man! They are described poetically - wow! ! ! Great!
Sometimes the differences of potential partners are stark yet very attractive. Hopefully this man will make a decision to court this beautiful woman or lose her forever with regret.10+
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7/18/2025 5:21:12 AM # 1.0.0
love is always entangling