Thursday, June 7, 2007

Phases... Comments

Rating: 4.9

I wrote this long time back …this poem if you go through it may just sound along with words, but to me it has a larger meaning. Maybe I could take you all along with my thoughts…it is an explanation of the life phases from childhood to the end journey…it is the synopsis of the experience of each phase…
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 July 2007

The road goes ever on...Only in heaven is the journey done.. beautiful poem Sangeeta..10

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Preeti - is here! 03 July 2007

The sheer beauty of this poem lies in it's simplicity and the craftsmanship...its wonderful! !

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R. S. Farris 22 June 2007

like the repetition; good job, too, weaving a meaning behind the surface. this is my favorite of yours; it bears re-reading!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 22 June 2007

This well written poem reminds me of an 'evolution' of thought. One's journey from self awareness to awareness of one's surroundings and evironment to achieve an understanding. Good one. L

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Melvina Germain 13 June 2007

This is a fabulous poem, well thought out indeed. Starting at the beginning of life in mothers womb, the sea actually depicting the water in the womb, from there to childhood, teenage years moving into adulthood facing trials and tribulations then finally preparing to move on to paradise for a life of eternity, that's the way I see it. Excellent, I enjoyed reading about this beautiful journey, thankyou Sangeeta.--Melinva-

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Edna Javelosa 10 June 2007

a display of innocence, tranquility, maturity, patience and ambition..great work, SI

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