Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Phantoms Of The Past Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why does a shadow always eclipse
The brightest and the sunniest of days
Just when everything seems right
Another shadow appears in sight
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jyoti saxena
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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 June 2009

Each plagued by memories that refuse to depart Each loving the other Yet too proud to let the other know.................... heart yet knows the mystery memory when ruffles across reef of truth................eloquently verse by truth of reason.memory never lays back yet by mystery, ingenious flow from true heart, and introspective too,10++++++, thanks for sharing

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Thoughts provoking lovely poem.10++

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the shadows are alwasy there.. visible only when light is near..

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ata khan 16 April 2009

The more night gets dark, the more sun gets brighter in the morning. This is a beautiful, light poem. With a very important message. Thanks a lot for sharing Jyoti Ji 10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 13 April 2009

well written and the emotions carry this poem to greatness.. amazing job

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Raj Nandy 09 April 2009

Jyoti, very well written! Our life remains a color of many blends, as we keep swinging between shadow and substance! -Raj Nandy

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 April 2009

Jyoti, this is a very beautiful poem. Shadows coming of and on, enhance the joy of warmth! Isnt it? I liked this mellowed tone u used for this poem, very impressive indeed.

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