Thursday, January 21, 2010

Phantom Of Tranquility Comments

Rating: 5.0

loaf of tears dropp in the clipping creek of the eye,
wondrous to feel, where a piece of grain falls off
tasted salt pour on the ground
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Antonio Liao
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Kranthi Pothineni 23 January 2010

Wow, the last line of this write is really beauiful and positive. Initial verse painted a wonderful image. Once again a lovely poem.10.

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Terence George Craddock 22 January 2010

nap dear little heart you’re Safe …… I'm glad u can nap 4 sleep is restoring... take it from one who has written Soulless Man, life must progress through many stages... stay beautiful

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