Phantom Lover Comments

lovely and sad I liked it really. reminded me of my own version of Phantom Lover please read it its as KiriYume.

Wow Lesa, You sound in love. I did that once too, I fell for someone on a poem site. Big mistake he was married and he never spoke to me again. I was crushed. I will never do that again. I think at the time was really insecure and that''s what happened. Oh well. Your poem reminded me of that incident. You wrote with good emotion and vivid imagery. Take care Lesa and good luck.