Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Phantom In My House Comments

Rating: 5.0

Phantom brewed a steaming cup of coffee when i woke.
Phantom cooked as I jogged past the gate.
Phantom ironed my clothes to neat and crisp, while I bathed.
Phantom had hand picked every piece in my breakfast plate.
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Poornima Raman
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Vijay Sai R 24 December 2012

your poem is a tribute to every mother

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Dave Walker 20 September 2012

A fantastic poem, like it.

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Heather Wilson 20 September 2012

Wow, you have a lovely mum, I guess she`s not really a phantom at all.a nice poem

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Valerie Dohren 19 September 2012

I think only a mother would do all this - and yours sounds wonderful.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 19 September 2012

don`t say about your mother like this hahaha!))))) oh.... nice poem.... i like the way you describe the phantom))) .... your imagination.

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