Friday, August 8, 2014

Phantom Deer.... [very Short; True; Vision; Personal] Comments

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When the Sun's out, deer sometimes graze in our backyard.
It's very easy to view them then; it very simply isn't 'hard'.
But 'tween dusk and 'dark', to see 'em you have to carefully peer,
and as it gets darker still, those browsers become 'phantom deer'.
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Bri Edwards
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Douglas Scotney 19 August 2014

same thing happens with wombats and volcanoes, Bri. Funny how the title came up right at the top and then ads and one that looks like the title just above your poem 'Asian Women Dating'

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Valsa George 13 August 2014

Simple but cute....! 'Phantom deer' all around! They must have been frightened at the sight of a 'phantom man' on the deck!

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