Ph: Stanford: Softly Off-Colored Poem #1 Comments

Bri's FORM FOR COMMENTING ON POEMS: [n/a = not applicable to this poem] Poem Comment Form As my shoulder I did abuse, here is what may amuse: A poem-comment “form”; I know it ain’t the norm. But if I write comments TOO long, I’ll never hear the end of the song: “Bri, I Told You, Take Care Of Shoulder; You’re Young No More & Getting Older”. So this simple form I have devised. Don’t look at me! Are you so surprised? If I use the form I MAY have more time … to read more poems with, or without, rhyme. After all, I can’t read and NOT comment, and if you must have MORE input ……….from me … send me a request ……….., though “more” AIN’T free. A. I enjoyed it: Yes ___ ; No___ ; I’m not telling__x_ B. I understood it: Yes_mostly__; No___; I’m not sure___ C. I enjoyed the: Rhyming ___; Rhythm___; Originality___; Cleverness__x_; Humor/Humour___; Seriousness_maybe__; Sensuality__x_; Humanity___; Alliterations__x_; Personal touch_n/a? _; Other __bras________ D. It makes me want to read more of your poems: Yes___; No___; I’m not telling_x__ E. The use of English was: Impeccable/good___; Deplorable/bad___; In between___; No comment_x__ F. Could use proofreading: Yes_x__; No___; You decide_x__ THANKS FOR SHARING. bri :)