Saturday, September 6, 2014

Ph: Song: Damn Girl! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chorus 1:

Damn girl,
If you need some grease,
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Brian Johnston
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Darlene Walsh 11 September 2014

I like your poem/song a lot. Good advice for many people, if you don't do something to make people notice you, life could just pass you by, missing 'life's bouquet.' I think it could make a nice song, all you need is some good music, and a singer. When I was young, my goal was to not be noticed. I was never the squeaky wheel, I tried silence. It didn't work, I still got far more attention than I wanted. Silence apparently became a squeaky wheel for me. Now I'm certainly not as silent as I used to be, but I still don't like too much attention. And I believe I've already won my lottery and have gone way past France, so not being the squeaky wheel works for me. While I once would have been more than content to just show or even less, I believe I have won far more than 1st place. Darla :)

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