Ph: Poetry Writing: Tiny Ships In A Bottle (And Variations) Comments

favorite lines: A seafaring breeze that helps ships leave safe harbor, Show a trace of their journeys to hither or yon, and May sea salt, perhaps, preserve past poet's promise .........nice alliteration! And tempt other poets to sail past their knowing, Truly follow their muses, no limits enshrine, ..............right on! NO limits! from one old salt to another: Thanks for sharing, Brian. this shall soon show up near the top end of Section A in October's 'a showcase for PH poets'. i like the rhyme scheme, but it was not very obvious to me bri :) p.s. recently i've often not found the submit button on a poem's page. but, EUREKA! , i discovered that if i copy the comment and go to send (to the poet) message AND then go back to the poem's page (without sending the 'message') i THEN FIND the elusive submit button where it belonged! this happened with this comment.